7.14 Closing Up 18

July 4th, 2018, 12:01 am

Author Comments:

Gibson Twist, May 20th, 2018, 4:47 am

I wrote a lot more one-liners for this scene, but I had to keep it moving along. I am deeply proud of my skill at writing "we fucked" jokes.

User Comments:

Kit T. (Guest), July 4th, 2018, 12:39 am

You know...
Not sure I understand Lauren's position here. She shouldn't have to worry about being 'caught' sleeping with anyone, let alone Peter finding out.
Just seems strange somehow, but I can't really put my finger on why it feels that way. Gotta wonder what she expected Peter to do, and why he'd do it.

Morfos (Guest), July 4th, 2018, 12:43 am

"We fucked" jokes
And that's not even using "fucked" as an adjective, is it?

SandSan, July 4th, 2018, 5:10 pm

@ Kit T.
I think it's a modesty thing or the fact that she's really close friends with Melanie, so her sleeping with Andy so soon after the reveal is probably going to reflect poorly for their relationship.

Guest, July 4th, 2018, 10:00 pm

Probably about the fact she's not used to casual sex. It could also be a "don't want to cause more drama" thing

NenaMataHari, July 5th, 2018, 1:47 am

Who DIDN'T Andy sleep with?

comicgirl, July 5th, 2018, 5:41 pm

I kinda wanna know how this started.

Andy was clearly drunk. Lauren wanted to get drunk...

Was that all it took? Alcohol?

Kotire, July 5th, 2018, 11:32 pm

To Alcohol! The cause of... and solution to... all of life's problems.

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