3.I.04 A Wise Investment 3

September 22nd, 2009, 10:01 pm

Author Comments:

Gibson Twist, September 20th, 2009, 8:11 pm

It's choose your own adventure time! Would you like to see...

A) Devon and Melanie have a fight.
B) Christo walk comedically into the door.
C) Peter kick Devon's ass like it's never been kicked.
D) The Kool-Aid mascot bust through the wall and offer refreshments.

User Comments:

amiko_16, September 22nd, 2009, 10:19 pm

haha I am torn between C and D :)

Evergrey06, September 22nd, 2009, 10:58 pm

... Is there a way all 4 could happen?

RadicalTrain, September 22nd, 2009, 11:18 pm

A followed by C or C followed by A seem fairly enjoyable in some more-likely-than-Kool-Aid-man to happen.

Wat (Guest), September 22nd, 2009, 11:24 pm

A, then C, then B.

IMO. :3

darkamnios, September 23rd, 2009, 12:02 am

Forget the Kool-aid guy..
A, C and then B.
Is about time!

Yazzydream, September 23rd, 2009, 12:06 am

Agrees with the two above. But mostly kicking Devon's ass.

Leon Rios (Guest), September 23rd, 2009, 1:59 am

A, C, B.

youngcannibals, September 23rd, 2009, 2:30 am

Y'know, I really like Kool-Aid.

Lani, September 23rd, 2009, 2:42 am

A and C interchangably definately followed by the Kool-Aid man

Jodie (Guest), September 23rd, 2009, 3:51 am

I should like for Devon to be dressed up as the Kool-Aid mascot

H0lyhandgrenade, September 23rd, 2009, 5:40 am

All four options, all in one go, would make quite the memorable page.

Clay (Guest), September 23rd, 2009, 8:32 am

A and then C. Maybe B after. But C needs to happen!

gun21, September 23rd, 2009, 9:18 am


Rei who's too lazy to log in. (Guest), September 23rd, 2009, 9:24 am

I vote A, then C, followed by B and then D

Guest, September 23rd, 2009, 9:26 am

D, totally. That guy rules.

Another guest (Guest), September 23rd, 2009, 10:28 am

Damn it, why make us choose? I want them all! But I guess I would have to settle for old fashioned slugging by good ol' Slugger. We haven't seem any of that for a while.

Strife (Guest), September 23rd, 2009, 10:31 am

I am totally for the favored: A. C, then B... but maybe instead of B, D happens at the end and the Kool-aid guy just so happens to break through the wall and crush Devon even more!

Oh! and the third last panel is just heart breaking, damn that guy is such a jackass.

Poussin (Guest), September 23rd, 2009, 10:55 am

I'd personally go for a mix of B and D, since they are not exclusive ;)

PasquinoX, September 23rd, 2009, 11:29 am

A could lead to C then D would lead to B.

tezzle, September 23rd, 2009, 2:49 pm

I have to pick D...I can't not pick D. In a possibly infinite number of alternate universes, I will never not pick D.

...I pick D.

DrJimmy (Guest), September 23rd, 2009, 6:05 pm

I'm in for C, though A and B have their merits. Save those ideas for the future.

Deep 6 option D, though. Cheap gag that's beneath your talent.

jd_singer, September 23rd, 2009, 6:16 pm

Option C must not come before A. Or Melanie's definitely lost to Peter (as a friend I mean) and the gang, so she won't ever come back into the story except maybe as a cameo in Snapshots.

So yeah, B. A. C. Christo goes off funnily, Melanie can't help laughing and Devon gets pissed off, he yells, Christo and Mulligan stoke the embers, Melanie finally yells too, Devon slaps her - and boom.

But if I get to choose, how about this variation? Christo makes Melanie laugh as above, Devon yells at her as above and Peter looms in on the fight with an uncharacteristic air of quiet menace. (A skill he learned in his new job.) He waits for Devon to catch his breath, and then asks him real nice like to apologize. (As real nice like as can be done with the hint of a savage growl in undertones.)

From there on, Devon yells some more, catches the glint in Peter's eye and cowers. Badly. Like a rat before a lion in the seconds before it realizes it's been cornered. Melanie sees a bit of what Devon truly is, and the first little crack in her slavery appears.

Of course, I'm asking a lot from Peter as I don't see him maturing enough to make this work. A better idea would be to use teamwork: as above except Mulligan does the talking (including asking Devon to apologize) and Peter growls softly behind him to drive the point home.

MonkeyDomi, September 23rd, 2009, 6:40 pm

Anyway... Mr. Gibson Twist. Mr. Gibson Twist. If YOU'RE not a comic-writing genius then such creatures don't exist!

I simply love how real this comic feels, how pleasantly drawn it is and how I cry and laugh with your characters because of how well written they are~

I'm jelous of your skill and I really enjoy this story<3

...Other than that, first B. Then A, than C and D. Why not.

Loonalily, September 24th, 2009, 1:58 am

C or A interchangeably. :D

migue (Guest), September 24th, 2009, 11:55 am

D) The Kool-Aid mascot bust through the wall and offer refreshments.

nothingwitty (Guest), September 24th, 2009, 12:33 pm

Devon's an arsehole
C first, A second, and C third

Bigbangboy, September 24th, 2009, 5:01 pm

Devon's a Jerk but I dig his hair, so not A. Christo's my favorite character, so not B. Watching Peter fight is like reading a comic while having orgasm. @#$% Kool-Aid for the time being.

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